Group+1

Chris, Audrey, Collin N.

Your assignment: Respond to an Application Letter. You may either accept the applicant or reject. Your choice.

This one is obviously really badly done. The mistakes are key errors that would be easy to fix but are important when it comes to writing an application letter. I think this one is a good one to fix but I don't think the length and information is sufficient enough to use. We could make it longer. Up to you guys. I think that this one has a lot of potential and would be a good one for us to work on. Only problem might be the length. A repsonse letter might be a long one. I really like this one. First, it has an interesting story to tell, unlike mine. Second, it is about the right length. Third, there is obvious room for improvement without the need for a complete re-write. This was a good find. This one would work pretty well. I think it might have more substance to work with than the one I uploaded.



After sorting through many lackluster application letters, I settled for this one. It seems pretty solid, simple, and straight forward. Note there's some meta information on the bottom as this is an instructional example. This is a good one to use. It's pretty clear and easy to understand already. I think the fixes we can make will be easy and there is no issue witht he length.

Chris would like to share this with the group.